04-07-2016, 02:04 AM
It may have been hard to write AJ but the poem is delightful, hope you find something to cheer you up 
a litre of wine usually does it for me 
just mercedes - I admire the passion you squeeze into the poem its as smooth as a caress, wonderful to read out load.
Achebe I love the voice in this one really fresh and kept my interest throughout very witty.
Billy excellent, what can I say you made me hungry...for more
Very witty Teagan I didn't smell the pizza cooking so it was a nice surprise, really like the layout and rhymes
a litre of wine usually does it for me just mercedes - I admire the passion you squeeze into the poem its as smooth as a caress, wonderful to read out load.
Achebe I love the voice in this one really fresh and kept my interest throughout very witty.
Billy excellent, what can I say you made me hungry...for more
Very witty Teagan I didn't smell the pizza cooking so it was a nice surprise, really like the layout and rhymes
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out