From tenements to sun dance lodge

[Keith]

I am not sure if I have read this right...I recently watched Longmire or some other similar thing with Red Indian rituals and this brought that sort of thing to mind.
It is powerful and slightly disturbing to read - (in a good way in that it grips me)  A departure from your normal voice - that i am also likeing.  I got a little lost in what exactly I am being asked to contemplate, but I don't mind being lost - A bit of mystery is good I think and that sometimes when a poem is heavily work-shopped it looses some of it's vitality.  So I'm not sure I would want to see it work-shopped.  I like it as it is.

Hi AJ sorry I missed your post with all the NaPalM flying around, yes I think I saw this on a film its about a native american ritual that involves getting high and being tied to the sun pole with bones through your skin until they rip, there is more to it but I don't think this one works so well. I would need to look at it again but there are others still sat in serious that I want to address first. Thank you for the bump. Best Keith