Time (moved from Mild to Fun)

Time (moved from Mild to Fun)

Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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04-05-2016, 10:01 PM

There's not much meat in the poem for the critic to digest and feed back. Suggest you employ a formal structure with a defined meter and rhyme scheme and repost it for more meaningful crit.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Time (moved from Mild to Fun) - by Uncle Tony - 04-05-2016, 08:51 AM

RE: Time - by billy - 04-05-2016, 05:50 PM

RE: Time - by Uncle Tony - 04-06-2016, 01:07 AM

RE: Time - by ellajam - 04-06-2016, 01:17 AM

RE: Time - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 10:01 PM

RE: Time - by Uncle Tony - 04-06-2016, 01:18 AM

RE: Time - by Achebe - 04-06-2016, 01:30 AM

RE: Time - by Uncle Tony - 04-06-2016, 02:25 AM

RE: Time - by ellajam - 04-06-2016, 01:48 AM

RE: Time - by milo - 04-06-2016, 02:02 AM

RE: Time - by Weeded - 04-06-2016, 02:59 AM

RE: Time (moved from Mild to Fun) - by milo - 04-06-2016, 03:51 AM

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