Behemoth
#3
Thanks, cider! It seems with this specific narrative, I keep jumping into density -- this one's elder was criticized as being a little overmuch too, though with it having a clear "key", it was a little less painful. I'll have to let this fester a bit more, though -- maybe even move on for a while to its planned sister (if the first one's based on Leviathan, and this one on Behemoth, then the third one should be Ziz), or something.
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Behemoth - by RiverNotch - 03-31-2016, 10:13 PM
RE: Behemoth - by cidermaid - 04-04-2016, 04:57 PM
RE: Behemoth - by RiverNotch - 04-05-2016, 09:32 PM
RE: Behemoth - by RiverNotch - 04-17-2016, 05:10 PM
RE: Behemoth - by Achebe - 04-23-2016, 07:22 AM
RE: Behemoth - by RiverNotch - 04-23-2016, 11:17 AM



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