04-04-2016, 04:47 PM
I am not sure if I have read this right...I recently watched Longmire or some other similar thing with Red Indian rituals and this brought that sort of thing to mind.
It is powerful and slightly disturbing to read - (in a good way in that it grips me) A departure from your normal voice - that i am also likeing. I got a little lost in what exactly I am being asked to contemplate, but I don't mind being lost - A bit of mystery is good I think and that sometimes when a poem is heavily work-shopped it looses some of it's vitality. So I'm not sure I would want to see it work-shopped. I like it as it is.
It is powerful and slightly disturbing to read - (in a good way in that it grips me) A departure from your normal voice - that i am also likeing. I got a little lost in what exactly I am being asked to contemplate, but I don't mind being lost - A bit of mystery is good I think and that sometimes when a poem is heavily work-shopped it looses some of it's vitality. So I'm not sure I would want to see it work-shopped. I like it as it is.