I'm leaving you

[Uncle Tony]

I'm leaving us my love,
my reckless entanglement,
my fucking mad, headlong descent
into today.
You swore we'd die entwined
in each other,
loving each other.
Give me a chance you said,
to prove my love, you said.
Ha! you had me there,
I didn't ever see this coming,
This cold, this freezing cold,
I'd have taken hatred any day.
Didn't I deserve that,
at least that?
Didn't I, my love?

How abut "I'm Leaving," or better yet, "Leaving" as a title, as opposed to "I'm Leaving You"?  Also, I'm not necessarily averse to the f word, however, it seems out of place here.  Lastly, I think it would be better w/o the "Ha! you had me there" line, i.e. it seems to take away from the depth.