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The real monsters.
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04-03-2016, 03:19 AM
I would like to say this isn't bad, I have to agree with some that this could definitely be spiced up with some rhyme however poems don't have to rhyme, make it your own. Maybe changing or adding something to it would add for flavor to the reader such as. "Hiding under the bed, in the closet, fearing that instead, the real monsters will turn on the light"
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The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-28-2016, 09:24 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Acephale - 03-29-2016, 10:58 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by UselessBlueprint - 03-29-2016, 02:17 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-29-2016, 04:55 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by ellajam - 03-29-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by egr - 03-31-2016, 11:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by KingPoetry - 04-03-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bucca - 04-06-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by mpilting - 04-06-2016, 03:43 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bunx - 04-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 09:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by timg516 - 04-09-2016, 06:03 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Humphrey - 04-19-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Quixilated - 04-28-2016, 05:59 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by humility - 04-30-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Sarah Luu - 05-14-2016, 07:08 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by psychonaut - 05-15-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Taivey - 05-15-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by QDeathstar - 05-18-2016, 01:02 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Seanwd98 - 05-24-2016, 11:09 PM
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