Adam and Eve
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Depending on how you do italics could be less clumsy, but it can also cause confusion if it is not made plain to the reader that it is Adams voice. If Adam is the Speaker/narrator then there may be no need for either. Either way you go it is somewhat of a stylistic opinion.

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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Adam and Eve - by Acephale - 03-29-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Adam and Eve - by dukealien - 03-29-2016, 11:12 AM
RE: Adam and Eve - by UselessBlueprint - 03-29-2016, 02:24 PM
RE: Adam and Eve - by Erthona - 03-30-2016, 05:18 AM
RE: Adam and Eve - by Acephale - 03-30-2016, 05:58 AM
RE: Adam and Eve - by Acephale - 03-31-2016, 01:30 PM
RE: Adam and Eve - by Erthona - 04-01-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: Adam and Eve - by Matthew McKeown - 04-02-2016, 07:38 PM
Adam - by Acephale - 04-25-2016, 06:29 PM



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