The Pub Where I Was Born
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I thought you stopped writing poetry Shem, now I see why.



Hahaha just kidding, I just had to use that corny line for some reason.

But foreally, this is dope! I had to google Sambuca, never heard of it. I see you just edited... But I kinda like the original more.. One of my favorite parts was the way it flowed from dismal into full.

Makes me wanna hit the barĀ  Confused
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The Pub Where I Was Born - by shemthepenman - 03-31-2016, 05:23 AM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by egr - 03-31-2016, 11:24 AM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by shemthepenman - 03-31-2016, 06:39 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by Weeded - 03-31-2016, 07:00 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by shemthepenman - 03-31-2016, 07:49 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by ellajam - 03-31-2016, 07:01 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by Keith - 03-31-2016, 07:19 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by RiverNotch - 03-31-2016, 10:30 PM
RE: The Pub Where I Was Born - by shemthepenman - 03-31-2016, 11:22 PM



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