03-31-2016, 07:00 PM
I thought you stopped writing poetry Shem, now I see why.
Hahaha just kidding, I just had to use that corny line for some reason.
But foreally, this is dope! I had to google Sambuca, never heard of it. I see you just edited... But I kinda like the original more.. One of my favorite parts was the way it flowed from dismal into full.
Makes me wanna hit the barĀ
Hahaha just kidding, I just had to use that corny line for some reason.
But foreally, this is dope! I had to google Sambuca, never heard of it. I see you just edited... But I kinda like the original more.. One of my favorite parts was the way it flowed from dismal into full.
Makes me wanna hit the barĀ
Crit away

