Ten Years After the Big Game
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I like the tone of this poem so much. It's very confident and touches on a subject that I don't think many people have much experience with in everyday life. "not a side eye in the house" was a very interesting line. A great way to describe the direct attention from onlookers, but in the context a beautiful fuck you to all who were witnessing what was unfolding. The use of language was great as well. Not course, souring the subtle awesomeness of this confident come out, it was just right. Smile
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Ten Years After the Big Game - by Nester - 03-25-2016, 11:36 PM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Achebe - 03-26-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by sithcat - 03-28-2016, 11:07 AM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Jasper - 03-28-2016, 03:36 PM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Emz - 03-28-2016, 09:21 PM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by cr4zyc0lt - 03-29-2016, 09:32 AM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Nester - 03-29-2016, 08:21 PM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Keith - 03-30-2016, 02:20 AM
RE: Ten Years After the Big Game - by Aidoneus - 04-17-2016, 10:30 AM



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