Minor Miracles
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I like the line "Try keeping that in a safe place." I read it as sarcasm, like something you would say after a scoff. But you can also read it as an off hand remark like, "well, I try keeping that in a safe place." Either way it's a good line. I do love poems about our trains of thought. I often forget people aren't in my head and start conversations in the middle of thoughts like these. Thank you for sharing!
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Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-26-2016, 11:04 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Achebe - 03-28-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-28-2016, 01:22 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by ellajam - 03-28-2016, 09:26 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by sithcat - 03-29-2016, 01:32 AM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-29-2016, 01:37 AM



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