Ten Years After the Big Game

[Emz]

Hi there, Nester.

I really enjoyed this poem.

I would have to be in agreement with Jasper in regards to "like a minor toady"; I'm not entirely sure what that's supposed to mean.

I didn't feel as though there was anything wrong with "unring the bell/unscrew the girl", not for me at least. I can see that the bell is referring to a boxing ring which becomes a metaphor for the act of sex (much like ACDC's "You shook me all night long").

Hope this is helpful.

Emma