Minor Miracles
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(03-28-2016, 06:42 AM)Achebe Wrote:  Opens up beautifully at 'pooling brown'. Loved the understated menace in 'made it real for me.'
The ending seems arbitrary, but it's only 'for fun', so I'm not complaining.
You're right. It's funny the ending seems arbitrary - that's the way it actually happened. The rest is me making associations. 
Paul
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Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-26-2016, 11:04 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Achebe - 03-28-2016, 06:42 AM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-28-2016, 01:22 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by ellajam - 03-28-2016, 09:26 PM
RE: Minor Miracles - by sithcat - 03-29-2016, 01:32 AM
RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-29-2016, 01:37 AM



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