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Minor Miracles

Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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03-28-2016, 06:42 AM

Opens up beautifully at 'pooling brown'. Loved the understated menace in 'made it real for me.'
The ending seems arbitrary, but it's only 'for fun', so I'm not complaining.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-26-2016, 11:04 PM

RE: Minor Miracles - by Achebe - 03-28-2016, 06:42 AM

RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-28-2016, 01:22 PM

RE: Minor Miracles - by ellajam - 03-28-2016, 09:26 PM

RE: Minor Miracles - by sithcat - 03-29-2016, 01:32 AM

RE: Minor Miracles - by Tiger the Lion - 03-29-2016, 01:37 AM

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