03-27-2016, 02:40 PM
I just had the strangest dream, where I was selling off our house to two crones who tried to seduce me by bearing their breasts and all that -- I resisted, because their breasts reminded me too much of my sister? And before that, something about Christmas --
Anyway, dream's making me think twice about this poem. It still feels kinda incomplete, but maybe because it's only two lines -- but the effect is there, I guess, so this should be sort of good. I'd support you returning the title to the poem's body, though.
Anyway, dream's making me think twice about this poem. It still feels kinda incomplete, but maybe because it's only two lines -- but the effect is there, I guess, so this should be sort of good. I'd support you returning the title to the poem's body, though.