I'm leaving you
#8
Another great piece I've seen from the short time on this forum I've had, you explain the feeling of breaking up with a girl (something I've unfortunately had to do) almost too well. Though I think it could've been a bit more fleshed out. Overall, a good work.
Love is evol.
Con is confidence.
Eros is sore.
Sin is sincere.
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Messages In This Thread
I'm leaving you - by DC Black - 03-18-2016, 09:59 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by DerTomatenToaster - 03-18-2016, 10:43 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Achebe - 03-19-2016, 10:54 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by The Raven - 03-20-2016, 10:32 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Erthona - 03-20-2016, 01:45 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Nester - 03-22-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Matthew McKeown - 03-25-2016, 08:36 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Mr.Malicious - 03-27-2016, 02:13 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Jasper - 03-28-2016, 03:22 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Acephale - 03-29-2016, 01:35 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Todd - 03-29-2016, 03:52 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Beyond all Lines - 03-29-2016, 11:02 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Uncle Tony - 04-04-2016, 08:17 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by timg516 - 04-09-2016, 06:05 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by DC Black - 04-09-2016, 08:52 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Desrei - 04-09-2016, 09:08 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by taratica - 04-12-2016, 09:21 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by babymonkey - 04-13-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Rogo - 04-15-2016, 03:51 AM
RE: I'm leaving you - by Shrewbe - 04-17-2016, 07:22 PM
RE: I'm leaving you - by laltieri0 - 04-18-2016, 02:09 AM



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