03-27-2016, 10:03 AM
Well, there is the normal every day shit one expects, then there is the extra, i.e. superfluous shit one wasn't expecting. So yes I do need "superfluous shit" in the poem, I could quite do away with all shit in the daily life. Funny, I thought you would call me down from "Somedays" not being a word! 
superfluous yours
dale
superfluous yours
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.