03-27-2016, 03:30 AM
I never have understood the need for blasphemy in poetry, but whatever floats your boat............
As for the poem, ditch must be a forced rhyme surely? ( body was held in a cave)
Also perhaps you should change "Mutton" to "Pork" as Jesus was a Jew? And I don't see why mutton has a capital M.
Although I am agnostic I fail to see humour in upsetting people who do have faith in a religion.
As for the poem, ditch must be a forced rhyme surely? ( body was held in a cave)
Also perhaps you should change "Mutton" to "Pork" as Jesus was a Jew? And I don't see why mutton has a capital M.
Although I am agnostic I fail to see humour in upsetting people who do have faith in a religion.