In memory of your adoration.

[aschueler]

Yeah, it is definitely forced. You have confirmed what I thought about it all along. I don't write very good poetry but I will continue to try until I do. I had never attempted to write rhyming poetry until I found this site and I find it to be difficult. I want to learn and grow. I want to write well. If something is horseshit then I need to hear it. I appreciate your honesty.

I didn't think this was horse shit.  The images you are working on are worthy, I started to warm up to the shimmering swirls that move. It gets jumbled, but there is promise here.  Your waterfall lets me down (painful pun).