If Maury Povich Were in Charge

[Mattp]

Nester - are you using computers as a metaphor for all society? I'm not sure - I'm intrigued but a little confused. In my experience poetry can accommodate some unusual forms, and I think you've fallen under the umbrella of what is poetic (maybe barely). I do think you need to make this a little more available to the laymen. I think this would confuse most people. It's inventive though - well done on that.

Hope this is helpful.

- Matt