The chocolate egg
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Thank you all for reading and your interesting comments. I had been reading "The Red Wheelbarrow" by William Carlos Williams and decided to try some of his ideas. His poem is very minimal and uses line breaks where words are important to the extent different words could slide into a different "story" or image. I hope there is what might be called a moment of decision at the line breaks in my poem Smile


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The chocolate egg - by Julius - 03-23-2016, 08:43 PM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Tracy Mitchell - 03-24-2016, 06:40 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by aschueler - 03-24-2016, 08:04 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Nester - 03-25-2016, 07:29 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Matthew McKeown - 03-25-2016, 08:15 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Acephale - 03-26-2016, 12:54 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Julius - 03-26-2016, 05:19 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Jasper - 03-28-2016, 10:25 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Lip Kingdavid - 03-30-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Erthona - 03-30-2016, 09:10 AM
RE: The chocolate egg - by Southern Scarab - 08-12-2016, 09:08 PM



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