03-25-2016, 01:06 PM
Apologies if I derailed your thread. As it is in a critical forum I have one thought below you might think about.
(03-25-2016, 09:27 AM)Erthona Wrote: Why No Clichés
If you use clichés
and refuse to stop,
you are as much as admitting you could strike "as much as" here. I think the tightness is worth the slight change of meaning. I dunno, sounds more firm to me.
you have no talent.
erthona
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