Routines: Poem 1

[Mattp]

CholSerp - hey, so a couple of points. Firstly I'll reiterate a statement already made that this reads more like prose than poetry. As far as prose goes I don't mind it, but I can't shake the impression this isn't a finished piece - it reads more like a beginning of something, like you're setting the stage for a story. If you added a few paragraphs, or more, after what you have I'd certainly read it.

Potential here. Thanks for the read,

- Matt