Embers

[Mattp]

porcelain - thanks for throwing some time at this, much appreciated. I think those two lines with "distant" can be hacked entirely. Actually most of this poem can be hacked entirely. I'm learning to read as a reader and I'm far from in love with this poem. Your other points are well taken.

CholSerp - yeah I have some new pieces./images that I think I like, but I'm well short of a revision. Going to go check out your stuff now - looking forward to it.

- Matt