The Clearing - Edit2
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Paul,

Yes, I agree. I like this edit much better than the original. There is a nice evenness about the pace that fits a modern pastoral. Plus the intent is much more clearly defined.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
The Clearing - Edit2 - by dukealien - 03-17-2016, 05:42 AM
RE: The Clearing - by tectak - 03-18-2016, 04:50 PM
RE: The Clearing - by CholSerp - 03-18-2016, 08:04 PM
RE: The Clearing - by Achebe - 03-19-2016, 06:31 AM
RE: The Clearing - by Erthona - 03-19-2016, 11:06 AM
RE: The Clearing - by dukealien - 03-19-2016, 01:00 PM
RE: The Clearing - by Erthona - 03-20-2016, 09:12 PM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by dukealien - 03-20-2016, 10:30 PM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by tectak - 03-21-2016, 07:18 AM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by Erthona - 03-22-2016, 02:35 PM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by dukealien - 03-22-2016, 10:16 PM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by ross hamilton hill - 03-23-2016, 06:01 AM
RE: The Clearing - Edit1 - by dukealien - 03-23-2016, 11:32 AM



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