03-18-2016, 09:35 AM
Thanks to Shem and Qdeath, it's a bit crap isn't it? However, the floodgates have now opened so expect more :-) Shem, this made me laugh, a lot .""" I would much rather read an entirely abstract poem done well, than some lazy half-arsed poem about cooking breakfast under the tenuous pretext of adult-angst or jaded cynicism [something not frowned upon enough in modern poetry]".
I have no clue, yet, about the technicalities of poetry but I do think that a poem should elicit some emotion. Thanks for reading, I shall do the same.
I have no clue, yet, about the technicalities of poetry but I do think that a poem should elicit some emotion. Thanks for reading, I shall do the same.

