Gentle Autumn

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Gentle Autumn

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03-16-2016, 07:11 PM

This is a love story, I found it quite beautiful, would we were all as lucky as this couple are. Some of the phrases are cliches, of course, but, for me, that didn't detract from the emotion of the piece. I agree that the word 'dreamily' needs replacing.

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Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-20-2016, 07:37 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by ellajam - 02-20-2016, 09:26 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-20-2016, 08:52 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by milo - 02-20-2016, 12:31 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Achebe - 02-20-2016, 02:34 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Weeded - 02-20-2016, 10:09 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-21-2016, 01:52 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by REW - 02-21-2016, 11:50 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-21-2016, 07:11 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by billy - 02-21-2016, 07:53 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-22-2016, 06:02 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by milo - 02-22-2016, 06:13 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by mackzmike - 02-22-2016, 06:13 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by ellajam - 02-22-2016, 02:41 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by 1skylande1 - 02-22-2016, 08:34 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-23-2016, 02:08 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by escher - 02-26-2016, 07:40 AM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 02-28-2016, 07:48 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by DC Black - 03-16-2016, 07:11 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by The Raven - 03-20-2016, 10:29 PM

RE: Gentle Autumn - by Julius - 03-23-2016, 03:41 AM

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