Embers
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Tiger, thanks for the critique. L5 was a mistake - don't know how I missed it. I think you're spot on the punctuation. I need to sort that out. Cheers,

- Matt
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Embers - by Mattp - 03-16-2016, 09:16 AM
RE: Embers - by Tiger the Lion - 03-16-2016, 10:05 AM
RE: Embers - by Mattp - 03-16-2016, 10:56 AM
RE: Embers - by billy - 03-16-2016, 05:48 PM
RE: Embers - by tectak - 03-16-2016, 09:54 PM
RE: Embers - by Mattp - 03-17-2016, 07:22 AM
RE: Embers - by CholSerp - 03-18-2016, 08:41 PM
RE: Embers - by Mattp - 03-19-2016, 08:30 AM
RE: Embers - by CholSerp - 03-23-2016, 06:20 AM
RE: Embers - by porcelain bones - 03-23-2016, 12:29 PM
RE: Embers - by Mattp - 03-25-2016, 10:14 AM
RE: Embers - by ross hamilton hill - 04-01-2016, 06:38 AM
RE: Embers - by Lucifer - 04-07-2016, 06:31 AM



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