Mr R.E. Cycle
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(03-12-2016, 12:25 PM)dukealien Wrote:  A lot of fun.  Not a critique thread, but the bumptuous and slightly unstable rhythm fits perfectly with my vision of R. E., top hat's top swiveling like a stove damper, a cross between W.C. Fields and Burgess Meredith as the Penguin.  White gloves... and spats, of course.

If anything's missing from the effect, it might be a bit of soused inversion - "King am I of wantless waste," or the like.
I like your vision of RE just how I see him too, thanks for reading and posting, much appreciated. You're right about the rhythm it does need some tightening I will have a look and a think about the Yoda speak, cheers Keith

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Mr R.E. Cycle - by Keith - 03-11-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: Mr R.E. Cycle - by dukealien - 03-12-2016, 12:25 PM
RE: Mr R.E. Cycle - by Keith - 03-16-2016, 02:23 AM



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