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Thief?
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03-13-2016, 10:18 AM
The overall poem and rhyme schemed worked very well. When it comes to the stressed and unstressed syllables I think some things got a little lost at the end. The reading of it is smooth, but if I sit there and try to count the beats it gets a little difficult to keep it. I like the picture it paints though and the feeling I get from when I read it.
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Thief? - by 1skylande1 - 03-03-2016, 11:35 PM
RE: Thief? - by Todd - 03-04-2016, 01:28 AM
RE: Thief? - by Erthona - 03-04-2016, 12:55 PM
RE: Thief? - by Ashok1 - 03-09-2016, 10:54 PM
RE: Thief? - by TonyMahoney - 03-11-2016, 01:35 AM
RE: Thief? - by Enginee - 03-13-2016, 10:18 AM
RE: Thief? - by Sarah Luu - 05-14-2016, 07:23 PM
RE: Thief? - by psychonaut - 05-15-2016, 01:18 AM
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