American Beauties

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey 71, I love this. Thoughts below...

One spring the city we lived in was sex, nice opening
caught heat in cool, rainy weather "caught" is a wonderful word choice here

we slept next to a radiator by a window back to reality with a strong image
on the east side maybe a little worn - still works

it was our slice of space: damp sheets,
crepe-like wallpaper, orange and yellow

For one whole season, you left your vagina great line but might be more blunt if "one whole" was just "a"
where I could find it

Later, you thanked me, but explained
there’d been a change in our story it's not you it's me? 

and you left just after all the American Beauties could probably strike "just" unless I'm missing a nuance
broke their first blossoms

Really enjoyable read. Good luck with it,
Paul