03-12-2016, 05:27 AM
This is wonderful, the only thing i can think to say that it could be easier to read with more broken up stanzas. The poem has such a great ebb and flow to it with the holding back-ish parts and the anxiety, then the romantic parts, it has a lot of character because if that, and adds more depth to the proclamations of love (not just talking about feelings but the feelings you have about those feelings). I don't know how to say that better sorry and sorry if I'm doing this critiquing thing wrong