The Madness of Frogs

The Madness of Frogs

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03-12-2016, 02:03 AM

Thank you everyone. I'm glad there wasn't very much wrong with it. I have considered the suggestions and changed "mouth" to "mouths" and done away with using a capital letter at the start of each line. I hope it reads a bit smoother now Smile

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The Madness of Frogs - by Julius - 03-06-2016, 07:31 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by Achebe - 03-06-2016, 07:37 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by Tiger the Lion - 03-07-2016, 03:58 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by tectak - 03-07-2016, 06:27 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by Julius - 03-08-2016, 02:00 AM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by tectak - 03-08-2016, 05:08 AM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by Julius - 03-09-2016, 08:37 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by actual_trash - 03-11-2016, 12:53 PM

RE: The Madness of Frogs - by Julius - 03-12-2016, 02:03 AM

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