California - Edit 1
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Honestly I think there is a lot more eloquence in 'make a pie from summer peach' a previous member complained that it would be multiple 'peaches' but you are not writing 'from a summer peach', it's 'summer peach' like making i pie from 'bramley apple'. it is the flavour of the pie not the ingredients list and quantity. like a banana smoothie, not a bananas smoothie. I also think pie from summer peach is far more evocative than 'simple family feast' which is light hearted and a little less impactful. peach pie sounds beautiful, maybe its just because i havent had breakfast yet.
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California - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 01-22-2016, 07:30 AM
RE: California - by 71degrees - 01-22-2016, 01:03 PM
RE: California - by REW - 01-23-2016, 07:50 AM
RE: California - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 01-27-2016, 11:46 AM
RE: California - by Erthona - 01-27-2016, 12:01 PM
RE: California - by slecht - 02-01-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: California - by Wjames - 02-05-2016, 02:34 AM
RE: California - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 03-02-2016, 11:10 AM
RE: California - Edit 1 - by REW - 03-06-2016, 11:17 AM
RE: California - Edit 1 - by faerykid - 03-08-2016, 09:44 AM
RE: California - Edit 1 - by UselessBlueprint - 03-09-2016, 03:39 PM
RE: California - Edit 1 - by jameso - 03-11-2016, 09:22 AM



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