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It's True, The Earth Is Flat edit 1 (Tiger, Tom, Achebe)

It's True, The Earth Is Flat edit 1 (Tiger, Tom, Achebe)
just mercedes
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03-10-2016, 09:01 AM
Really well done, and this is a stand-alone, even without Dale's poem. I love the double meaning of 'plane' at the end. And you're not alone in your feeling!
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RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-10-2016, 02:31 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by Keith - 03-10-2016, 07:19 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-10-2016, 07:54 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by tectak - 03-10-2016, 08:02 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-10-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by tectak - 03-10-2016, 04:45 PM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by just mercedes - 03-10-2016, 09:01 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by heslopian - 03-10-2016, 03:00 PM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ephemerald - 03-10-2016, 05:09 PM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by Achebe - 03-10-2016, 05:48 PM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-11-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-11-2016, 03:58 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by 71degrees - 03-13-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 03-13-2016, 09:24 AM
RE: It's True, The Earth Is Flat - by ellajam - 05-19-2016, 09:57 PM



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