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The Fourth Stooge

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03-09-2016, 06:34 PM

Hi - I found this to be too full of metaphors. Couldn't quite understand in the end what it was that you were saying. I also found your abandonment of "the" unsatisfactory. Good luck.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Bloomer - by ephemerald - 03-09-2016, 02:57 AM

RE: Bloomer - by Adoran - 03-09-2016, 06:11 AM

RE: Bloomer - by just mercedes - 03-09-2016, 06:43 AM

RE: Bloomer - by aschueler - 03-09-2016, 08:52 AM

RE: Bloomer - by ephemerald - 03-09-2016, 09:08 AM

RE: Bloomer - by Achebe - 03-09-2016, 06:34 PM

RE: Bloomer - by ephemerald - 03-10-2016, 04:36 PM

RE: Bloomer - by Achebe - 03-10-2016, 06:38 PM

RE: Bloomer - by TonyMahoney - 03-11-2016, 02:20 AM

RE: Bloomer - by ephemerald - 03-11-2016, 08:17 AM

RE: Bloomer - by aschueler - 03-11-2016, 09:00 AM

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