Bloomer

[just mercedes]

I like the imagery used, and the writing is fluid and obviously thought-out. The one thing that stands out for me is the uneasy tension between dark and light. In the first stanza, if 'light of night' is moonlight, evergreen would be a greyish colour. Then in stanza 4 you have night, and things blooming, reaching for the sun, whereas at night most blooms are closed. Good poem though, keep working on it.