A Prayer of Walter Mitty's -Edit
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(03-05-2016, 09:04 PM)Julius Wrote:  I like the change in meaning of "dream". The switch from thinking of her as a living walking "dream" to realising she really is a figment of a real sleeping dream works well for me Smile
Thanks Julius, one of my favourite things is trying to mix complex ideas with simplistic language and brevity. Dale was a huge help on this one because he always reminds me to remove myself from the poem. I made the title do a lot of work in this one, but I consider 12 successful words a result.  
Thanks for reading.
Paul
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RE: A Prayer of Walter Mitty's - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 02:02 AM
RE: A Prayer of Walter Mitty's - by Magpie - 02-22-2016, 02:18 PM
RE: A Prayer of Walter Mitty's - by Erthona - 02-23-2016, 06:40 AM
RE: A Prayer of Walter Mitty's - by Erthona - 02-25-2016, 01:21 AM
RE: A Prayer of Walter Mitty's -Edit - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 09:04 PM
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