Poetry in Real Time #5
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A charming and easily imagined "picture in poetry" that generates a warm feeling on a cold daySmile
The only thing which jars with me is the dinner plate sized doilies. The rest of the poem is so believable that, at least for me, although the picture is magical the exaggeration takes away some of the realism.
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Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Keith - 03-04-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2016, 05:19 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 03-07-2016, 03:23 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Lizzie - 02-13-2017, 03:45 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by Tiger the Lion - 02-15-2017, 02:14 AM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by canofworms - 02-16-2017, 02:41 PM
RE: Poetry in Real Time #5 - by ellajam - 05-10-2017, 09:36 PM



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