A Cure for a Stammer edit 0.1keith,tiger

[tectak]

My father stammered from about the age of six to well into his forties. There is nothing "funny" about it.
What I said was that I would have received the poem differently in the fun forum. I suppose Misc would be more appropriate but I don't associate the "fun" forum with strictly funny subject matter. There are poems in that forum about murder and gang rape ffs. By all means workshop it. I'll be happy to help if I can.
Paul

Hi tiger,
No, no. No criticism intended. I fully appreciate the difference between funny in content and funny in forum
This IS for workshopping. In fact, I have already slipped in a mini edit.
My comment on the increase in intensity of the stammer with stress I have personal experience of, albeit third party. I didn't want this one to go on for too long and so I "allowed" the character to tell his "story", stressfully in recall, then to confess what he has done...stress falls away, stammer gone. That is all. I don't do complicated.
Best,
tectak