03-02-2016, 08:51 AM
I am fairly sure I catch a lot of what blueprint is trying to elucidate. It's chock full of images, some so tight you can only catch a scent of it. Its confusing because its either too much (most likely) or not enough and needs expansion.
I see a combo of Rob Frost road not taken (the odd train that's late), then some Walter mitty ... Just a little. Frustration of technical job after an apparent missed opportunity....even Monsters, Inc.
Some sort of existential crisis ending in poo, an almost childlike frustration at apparent failure.
So I would go hacking off bits to expand whats the most important. Hope this helps some.
I see a combo of Rob Frost road not taken (the odd train that's late), then some Walter mitty ... Just a little. Frustration of technical job after an apparent missed opportunity....even Monsters, Inc.
Some sort of existential crisis ending in poo, an almost childlike frustration at apparent failure.
So I would go hacking off bits to expand whats the most important. Hope this helps some.