Two Eggs
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(09-14-2013, 01:21 AM)shenaz Wrote:  Two eggs in the pot
Two nice round eggs
The water is hot and the heat is on
We splutter and curdle
Two round eggs
In the heat of the moment
Nice and simple. Very clear picture, but it's kind of not clear what are you trying to convey. 
At least , this is my perception

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Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 01:21 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 04:01 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 04:05 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Snowbells - 09-14-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-03-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by LickinLyrics - 02-03-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by tomoffing - 02-03-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by DominoMan - 02-03-2014, 02:41 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-07-2014, 07:26 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-08-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 03:58 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:29 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-12-2014, 03:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by cfgorman - 03-01-2014, 01:27 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 03-02-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Izo - 03-15-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by WordJunky - 03-16-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by Babeanew - 04-04-2014, 09:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 02:10 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by California - 04-07-2014, 07:40 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:23 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Robert9614 - 04-22-2014, 08:35 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Willpark - 04-29-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by RiverNotch - 04-29-2014, 06:17 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by constellation - 04-30-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 05-01-2014, 09:27 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by bbcashdollar - 05-12-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:22 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by newsclippings - 05-12-2014, 11:38 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Igor - 02-28-2016, 11:06 AM



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