Leopard

[Julius]

Thank you Keith, I can entirely see what you are getting at. I like graze, but would have to use grazes to indicate only one okapi eating his last meal, which adds an extra unwanted syllable. I will work around it - perhaps change okapi to zebra although I read that okapi are the favourite prey of leopards. I agree the last line feels somewhat cumbersome. I shall have a think and come back