02-27-2016, 07:59 AM
It's vaguely better, but I have trouble loving the couplet. The rest is dandy, esp enjoy the "...a tested, public proof. // You likewise trust the pillars of your mind - // Relgion, romance, ideology..."
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Night’s Geology - Edit3 - by dukealien - 02-15-2016, 09:09 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - by Erthona - 02-15-2016, 11:29 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - by dukealien - 02-15-2016, 12:45 PM
RE: Night’s Geology - by RiverNotch - 02-16-2016, 12:18 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - by aschueler - 02-16-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - by dukealien - 02-16-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Night’s Geology - by UselessBlueprint - 02-16-2016, 01:14 PM
RE: Night’s Geology - by dukealien - 02-17-2016, 12:08 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - by ellajam - 02-16-2016, 01:34 PM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit1 - by Todd - 02-17-2016, 12:28 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit1 - by billy - 02-17-2016, 12:50 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit1 - by aschueler - 02-17-2016, 10:07 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit1 - by UselessBlueprint - 02-17-2016, 10:30 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit2 - by dukealien - 02-17-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit3 - by dukealien - 02-26-2016, 11:03 AM
RE: Night’s Geology - Edit3 - by aschueler - 02-27-2016, 07:59 AM
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