Welcome To October Country
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I do enjoy this poem as well, took a look at Tiger's edit and I have to agree with him. When you block together ideas into stanza's it is alot clearer for the reader to find your ideas and separate them from line to line making the piece a better whole. Thanks again for the read!
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Welcome To October Country - by mackzmike - 02-26-2016, 07:26 AM
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