02-27-2016, 12:30 AM
I do enjoy this poem as well, took a look at Tiger's edit and I have to agree with him. When you block together ideas into stanza's it is alot clearer for the reader to find your ideas and separate them from line to line making the piece a better whole. Thanks again for the read!
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

