02-26-2016, 12:17 PM
The first three sentences are dependant clauses.
"Mortality has always preoccupied the clever ape who fears change above all else, the only unknown in which I have found faith." (How can one find faith in an unknown?)
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"The difficulty for the ape in me is to see beauty imminently."
imminently: "likely to occur at any moment; impending"
This line seem to be there for the rhyme, otherwise it makes little sense.
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This is (obviously) not particularly well written. The lines that do make sense are more or less cliche. The idea of faith seems barely spoken to , of course the first three sentences does prejudice one.
Best,
dale
"Mortality has always preoccupied the clever ape who fears change above all else, the only unknown in which I have found faith." (How can one find faith in an unknown?)
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"The difficulty for the ape in me is to see beauty imminently."
imminently: "likely to occur at any moment; impending"
This line seem to be there for the rhyme, otherwise it makes little sense.
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This is (obviously) not particularly well written. The lines that do make sense are more or less cliche. The idea of faith seems barely spoken to , of course the first three sentences does prejudice one.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.