02-25-2016, 08:16 PM
Nice one. I had Guinea pigs for pets and can sympathise with their cousins the poor groundhogs (same piggie teeth).
Didn't care much for sky-glow. Too faux poetic. Otherwise, nice. Great last 2 lines.
Didn't care much for sky-glow. Too faux poetic. Otherwise, nice. Great last 2 lines.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe