02-25-2016, 06:27 PM
Hi Mark,
Think this is a worthy subject to pursue further 9esp after reading your notes) and good that you have given it a bump and set up a discussion starter.
I am wondering if perhaps it could be set out as a paired poem with a flip side stanza to read the other way.
(the perspective of the tormentors and the protectors)
we had a couple of kids in our school and it was about 50 /50 over the side who looked out for them and included them and those who were mean.
Think this is a worthy subject to pursue further 9esp after reading your notes) and good that you have given it a bump and set up a discussion starter.
I am wondering if perhaps it could be set out as a paired poem with a flip side stanza to read the other way.
(the perspective of the tormentors and the protectors)
we had a couple of kids in our school and it was about 50 /50 over the side who looked out for them and included them and those who were mean.
(01-01-2016, 09:28 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: children
laughing -
at the "spacca"

