02-24-2016, 09:23 AM
a few more minor points:
1) 'Samsara' should have a dot under the 'm', otherwise it is spelt more correctly as 'Sansara'
2) 'fetid swamp' is both a cliche and a bit of a stretch, since the flow of the river, even in the dry months, is too large for water to stagnate. 'Fetid water' maybe
1) 'Samsara' should have a dot under the 'm', otherwise it is spelt more correctly as 'Sansara'
2) 'fetid swamp' is both a cliche and a bit of a stretch, since the flow of the river, even in the dry months, is too large for water to stagnate. 'Fetid water' maybe
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe