02-23-2016, 12:42 PM
I prefer honesty to positivity any day of the week.
Posted a more metrically correct version with no significant changes. The only aberration remaining is the double anapaests in the "A" refrain. While the solution is obvious (we followed the calls of crows to River Ganges) it was so ugly I couldn't bring myself to do it.
Posted a more metrically correct version with no significant changes. The only aberration remaining is the double anapaests in the "A" refrain. While the solution is obvious (we followed the calls of crows to River Ganges) it was so ugly I couldn't bring myself to do it.